Hello all.
Things are coming together on the “The Invisible Order” front. (Note that this is now the name of the series and not the name of book one. See below.) I’ve handed in the first round of edits to my wonderful editor, Ruth Katcher. During the edit I managed to cut out (mostly on Ruth’s recommendations) about five thousand superfluous words, mst of it needless stage direction. “Emily glanced over…”, Emily looked across…”, Emily wakled slowly toward…”. Yes, this kind of thing is needed occasionally, but not in the amounts I’d put in. I’m not sure if this comes from writing for television or not, but it’s a habit I’ve got to break.
Now to the title. After some discussion between my editor, Egmont, my agent, and myself, it was decided to change the title of the series from “The Hidden Histories” to “The Invisible Order.” It was felt that having ‘Histories’ in the series title might be a bit of a no-no where middle grade/YA readers are concerned, and seeing as The Invisible Order features strongly in all the books, it seemed the perfect name to use for the series. Book one has now been retitled “Rise of the Darklings.” I love the new title, but I think it’ll take a while for me to get used to it, only because I’ve been calling the book “The Invisible Order” for the past five years or so, ever since it started out as a short story in the anthology “Under Cover of Darkness”.
So that’s where we stand. I’m currently planning out book two, and it’s coming together nicely. Looking forward to getting started on it. I’m contemplating buying a macbook and Scrivener to write on, ever since trying out the program on Caroline’s mac. It’s so much better to write on that M$ Word.




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